Tamaki Story Concept 1 - Nathan

Here is sketch design concept of a greeting card design I am currently in the process of making. The card relates to the Tamaki Story. I would appreciate some feedback about what you like and what you don't like about the placement of text and images on the design.

The following is a brief description of different parts of the design concept:

1. the Tamaki Story logo would be placed in the top, right hand corner of the design
2. the blue colour in the middle is a faded washout
3. the squares at the bottom hold images that will relate to the 'value'
4. the double spaced lined under the value 'Aroha' will have a provert, whakatauki or quote that will help give the value more meaning

Thanks, Nathan

Tamaki Story Concept 2 - Nathan

This is my second design concept for greeting cards, that I would like feedback for.

The design concept includes the following:

1. images will be vertically placed on the left hand side
2. the 'value' will be placed in the middle, in bold and large, with a quote underneath relating to the 'value'
3. the Tamaki Story log will be placed in the top left hand corner

Thanks, Nathan